What the Business Did to Me

Guest 6 years ago

The book was all over the place and the ending was horrible the time frames wasn't clear when all this took place it was never explained/clarified what disease Derrick gave the other women, the unrealistic reactions to her having aids and everyone that she told about it.

Guest 6 years ago

horrible ending.

Guest 6 years ago

The book really wasn't that bad. I just got confused towards the middle leading towards the end. Everything seemed out of place and the reactions the characters had towards Shontelles news was pitiful. Also why did it just end like that ?

Guest 6 years ago

What a horrible book! It had major typos. Hated the lingo, I guess they were supposed to be African American and used all of this ridiculous slang that wasn't really slang. Mispelled words. Is this book old? I saw the bad ratings it received but wanted to give it a try anyways. What a waste and it was only like 10 pages long!!!! This should be considered a short story. Wow, just wow. This could have been so much better.

Guest 7 years ago

The book was ... all over the place .. while i enjoy a book that goes right into the dramatics this book seem to be too much too early in the book until i realized that it ended .. i thought some chapters were missing... im just not understanding where is the real story, all of these events happen over a weekend span? ... and the way the presentation of shontelle contracting aids and her reaction about it and her mothers reaction about it was not realistic she wasn't sad or angry about it it was like if she was just told she had something that wasn't life changing and how quick it was that she found out and we were never told what disease her pimp boyfriend actually had that he was giving out /. i think the writer should continue to write but be more in touch with the characters and take these events and spread them one chapter at a time with a real ending

Guest 7 years ago

The book was lovely, however the ending was a bit dull for me and i was very disappointed. It was very engaging. i wanted to read on and on and on again so i could know what the next chapter was gonna be about.

Guest 7 years ago

the book was ggod but my thing is why did shontelle having aids i perfer getting pregnat i also thik that it left so many unanswered question about dedrick so but other than that it was just i was hopping for better ending thats all

Guest 7 years ago

i love the book ...but damn it end so stupid... im upset

Guest 7 years ago

Omg I fell in love with this book and so mad it ended this way smh

Guest 7 years ago

The booked kept me interested because, I finished reading it, therefore, I applauded the writers for keeping my attention. The Before, and After was an interesting way of reading a book, but nevertheless I liked the idea . I was also intrigue with the sexiness of the book. However, I kept reading because, I was hoping that it would make a twist in a positive direction. The ending was terrible, as if it was due in seconds to be published. However, I encourage the authors' to continue writing, I'm sure things will only get better.